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You can't see me
You can't tell me who I want to be
What can I do
To convince you
That I am all you'll ever need?
And I start to understand
And I smile in my sleep

Death watcher
Dream taker
Stone believer
Heart breaker

I watch you Mr. Death
I know what you want
Dying is your greatest
Torture
You taunt me with life
I smile knowing
You can't get me this time

So forgive the misgivings
I've tried so hard to find you
I even see you in my dreams
Your face turned blurry and hued
And I waved goodbye to Mr. Death
As I breathed my last breath
As I smile in my sleep
ahh a little something something
that I jotted down

I got the Picture from Google I did not Draw or make it

ok ok guys lets stop the arguing here
I think everyone should stop the verbal fighting because
of someone dislikes my poem or not, whether someone uses a petty insult
just shake your head and move on please
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:iconderek-l-j-sohma:
Derek-L-J-Sohma Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Gorgeous poem but a sad concept, still, I loved it
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Whats-Left-Of-Me Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Artist
thanks, I'm glad you love it
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:iconderek-l-j-sohma:
Derek-L-J-Sohma Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
XD You're welcome
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KYghost Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D The Poem is great!!!...Not sure if I agree with the use of unknown cover art...I know it makes it more attractive but, the original artist may not be fond of the idea if they are protective of their work.
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Whats-Left-Of-Me Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Artist
well I got it off Google, and if someone claims it then I will put in a different one, and as long as I didnt say I made it then I should be good. I have the cover art so it can help with the visual
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CatsandJammers Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
There's only one thing I say to death
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Whats-Left-Of-Me Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Artist
uhh?
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Limro Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Where did you get the picture?

And nice poem!
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Whats-Left-Of-Me Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Artist
^o^ thanks
I got it off google
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xLuckyxFridayx13x Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! I love the concept!
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